Criteque of F*** My Girlfriend

Read full, unedited version of F*** My Girlfriend HERE. ————— Though the title has a certain amount of shock value, its name is more likely to alienate a lot of potential readers. As for your writing, I found that it was lacking character development, quite a lot. All I know about your main character is…

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Critique of ‘Fields of Heather, Fists of Brass’

Read the unedited no critiques included of Fields of Heather, Fists of Brass. (He has other neat stuff, so don’t forget to look around!) ————————————————————————- This title is unique, but doesn’t give an indicator to what the books about. I feel foolish to admit, that I had no idea what Heather is. I thought you…